RW Short: The Huddle

June 28th, 2014 by Robin 6E

“Come on Jim!” shouted Greg, eager to move on. Jim swam after him, not wanting to leave the beautiful coral behind. “Jim, I told you to stay with me!” exclaimed Greg. Greg was a very impatient fish, who didn’t like to wait for long periods of time. “Sorry, Dad” said Jim. “I was really addicted to that coral.” Unlike his father, Jim could wait around for long periods of time, even admiring the most boring things.

Jim and Greg swam on through the coral until they finally met their group. Strangely, they were all a bit quiet. “Whats up fellas?!” said Greg, excited to get going. “Shh!” said Maria. “Bob was chased here by a shark, and he didn’t know where it went.” Then, out of the darkness, emerged a very large mouth. All of the fish immediately got into a huddle. Then, there was a loud belch, and all of the fish were swallowed.

Apart from Jim, who was in the toilet.

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6 Responses to “RW Short: The Huddle”

  1. Rosie 6E says:

    Awesome story Robin! It is funny how every fish got eaten except Jim, who was in the toilet probably reading “Swimming weekly”! 😉

  2. Taylor 6E says:

    Nice short story robin, I wonder if we will see Greg and Jim on the way to the Isle Of Wight!

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